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Kelly Ch. 04

Ch. 04 Coaches and Parents

Personally I like Parts 1 through 3 but you don t have to read them before reading this. Thanks to all who have given me feedback it s gratifying to know you re enjoying these flights of fantasy.

School on Monday was terrible. I could think of nothing but Kelly and our weekend. I saw her only in English class and I couldn t take my eyes off her. She was so beautiful. I remembered how much I loved brushing her hair. I remembered all our sweet lovemaking. At the end of class I had to think about calculus to let my boner subside.

But gym class was the worst. The guys knew something was up. I told them I d taken Kelly out and it was instantly mayhem.

You took Kelly Morgan out? Lucky duck!

She s gorgeous!

Is she as oversexed as I think she is?

Didja get any?

Whadja do? Wheredja go? What s she like?

I ve heard she s a stuck-up bitch.

Yeah she doesn t give any so I m told.

Did Big Justin wield the one-eyed lizard?

Did she get scared away by it?

Did you choke her with it?

There were gales of laughter as they were completely gross at my expense.

I let it all flow over. Then I said simply We had a nice time. She s a nice lady.

Gonna take her out again?

Yeah. In fact I hope to see a lot of her.

Hoots and hollers screams and yells. Justin s in looove! Little did they know. On the one hand these were my friends and in a certain way I wanted to stand on top of the lockers and scream out my love for Kelly as loud as I could. On the other hand I felt it was extremely private and I didn t want to tell them anything.

Hey back off. Justin needs our help. He needs our advice on how to treat Kelly like a lady. OK guys during class everybody has to give Justin a suggestion about what he should do with Kelly. Cheers and affirmation greeted this idea. And they did. Every minute during class somebody would whisper advice about my dealings with Kelly. It was awful. It was crass. It was also very funny. They were coaching me. My coaches.

That night I had tons of homework. I called Kelly.

Hi!

Hi!

How was your day?

Awful Justin. I can t stop thinking about you.

Same here. And I told the guys at gym about us.

Really? And what happened?

It was awful. They said the worst things. They tried to pry stuff out of me and then they decided to give me advice all through class. So every minute or so somebody would whisper a suggestion about what I should do with you. They thought they were coaching me.

What did they say?

It s way too crass to talk about. I d rather just tell you how much I love you.

You re changing the subject. They were really foul huh?

Amazingly so.

Jerks.

In a way. But they re also my friends so I can feel some affection behind it. And some envy I think. Just not a lot of maturity.

Are you going to take their suggestions?

Truth be told I already have taken some.

Oh really. She didn t sound pleased And did you brag?

No Kelly. I told them we d gone out that we were going to go out again and that I hoped to see a lot of you. That s all.

Are you sure that s all? You didn t brag a little?

They know what Kelly Morgan looks like. I don t have to brag when the evidence is right before their eyes. That you would even go out with me brags without my saying anything.

You didn t even brag a little about what we did?

Not a word I said starting to get a little angry I told you that all of that is between you and me alone. To tell would cheapen it. I didn t even tell them a word about you making dinner. No details at all.

I believe you she said but not convincingly When can I see you again? There was a plaintive note in her voice.

Too much homework tonight. Can I take you out for ice cream tomorrow after supper?

OK. About seven?

OK. See you then.

Tuesday couldn t go by fast enough. It was another day of torture from not seeing Kelly to getting loads more advice from my coaches.

I was fifteen minutes early to pick up Kelly. Bad idea. She wasn t ready and was annoyed. I spent the time talking to her parents. Her dad was almost my size and looked like he d been quarried from granite. Her mom was tiny like Kelly and very pretty. It was clear where Kelly got her looks. They were nice to me but inquisitive. It wasn t quite the third degree but I was being interrogated. Her dad in particular seemed very protective. If my daughter looked like her I would be too.

Soon enough I opened the car door for Kelly took my place behind the wheel and we took off for ice cream. Her parents watched us leave.

Good move opening the door. Mom ll like that.

Will you tell her that I do it all the time and not just for her consumption?

Yeah. It ll be part of the sales job.

Sales job?

Do you realize how important it is for me to convince them to like you?

I hadn t thought of it. But you re right.

Will you be selling me to your folks? she asked.

Dad will be easy. He s my best friend and if I tell him how special you are to me he ll love you and be glad. Mom will hate you but I expect that as part of the Disease.

Disease?

Her alcoholism. She hates all my friends guys and girls.

You have other girlfriends? You never told me that. She was prickly tonight.

That s not completely true. I have no other girlfriends but I have a number of other girls who are just friends and I distinctly remember telling you that. We even talked about them at the beach. I said referring to our day beached on her living room floor.

She calmed a little. You re right. I remember. I m sorry Justin. I just miss you so much it makes me crabby.

We got to Dipper Dan s. We ordered the usual.

And Kelly?

Yes?

Please for my sake no oral sex with the ice cream tonight.

She laughed. OK. But will you take me parking after ice cream?

Ice cream and parking? That s our date? And you complain about how other guys only want you for sex? How am I supposed to feel?

Like my sex toy. How does it feel?

I love it I said then more quietly But Kelly remember that I make love with you I don t have sex with you. Please always remember that difference.

I remember it every minute she replied It keeps me warm even on chilly spring mornings. That s why I want to go parking so badly.

It was a clear spring night. The peepers peeped all around the pond where we went. It was just about eight and dark. The air was chilly. I kept the car running and turned on the heat with the top down. In 1973 gas was 29 cents a gallon.

What time do you have to be home? I asked.

By 10 for sure but it would be better if it was earlier. Kelly said.

She was wearing a shirt that buttoned in front. She had tied it up under her breasts exposing her delicious tummy. Sometime during ice cream a few buttons that hadn t been unbuttoned in front of Dad had come loose showing off smooth skin between lovely breasts (When had she done that? I wondered). She wore gym shorts that clung to her hips and showed her legs. She had moved to the middle of the bench seat after ice cream and had held my leg while I drove.

If you don t kiss me right now I ll scream she said.

I took her in my arms. Our tongues explored each other. It was heavenly. I moved my hand inside her shirt and cupped her. She wore no bra. Her nipple was already hard. Her breast was an exact handful and felt so firm yet soft. I caressed it and squeezed her nipple gently. She sighed and moved her hand to my bulge. She felt me with her fingers tracing its length. We spent a long time caressing each other. Then she unzipped my pants and touched my cock through my briefs. I moved the waistband down so she had access to my manhood. She stood it up straight and slowly stroked its length. We kissed some more. I moved to her shorts cupping her pussy through the cotton. She moaned and spread her legs. I slipped my fingers inside her shorts and felt very wet panties. I moved them aside and found her pussy lips wet and inviting. She stroked me harder and started to breathe more heavily. I slipped a finger inside her vagina and started my own stroking motion to match hers on my cock. She bucked against my finger. She broke our kiss and panted as I finger-fucked her. She stopped stroking my cock as she was totally enveloped by the feel of my caresses.

That s it buster! Now you re going to get it! She pulled away from my hand and dropped to take my cock into her mouth. She started giving me a most wonderful blowjob. As she did she knelt on the seat and I had the perfect chance to work her shorts and panties down to her knees. Then I grabbed her by the waist lifting her up. I dropped down to lay on the seat and lowered her to my mouth. She pulled off my cock long enough to yelp as I lifted her. Realizing what I was doing she resumed her kind ministrations to my dick. For my part proud of my gymnastic skill and feeling lucky she hadn t clamped her teeth at the wrong instant I commenced to eat her most delightful pussy. I licked and sucked. I nibbled her lips avoiding her clit. She ground her hips into my face and sucked hard on my cock taking the head in her mouth and stroking my shaft with her hands. And so we enjoyed each other. I brought her to orgasm several times which I could tell because she would come up for air clench her legs to my ears moan and shudder. After a moment she would resume her wonderful sucking.

Do you want to make love? I asked.

No. I want to bring you off this way she breathed.

Fine with me. Just thought I d ask I replied happily. I resumed my own snack with renewed fervor.

Soon I could hold back no longer. At almost the right moment she lifted her pussy off my face so she could swallow my entire length. When she did I exploded in her throat pumping what felt like gallons of sperm. She gagged but held on tight her nose touching my balls and my entire length down her throat. Unbelievable. I just cupped her ass cheeks and held them. Such a tight ass. Such wonderful cheeks. She came up for air - literally - gasping.

I can t believe I did that! she panted. We sat up.

I can t believe you did either I said slightly short of breath myself after an orgasm like that.

Did you like it? she asked playfully.

Best parking by far that I ve ever done

Oh really? she asked now with an edge Do you go parking often?

Can t say I ve ever been before. This car s a virgin.

Yeah but you haven t been driving this car that long she said now clearly upset.

Kelly I ve never been parking before. And certainly not like this.

OK I believe you. She still had the edge in her voice.

It s getting late. I think I d rather deliver you a little early our first time out with your parents at home.

That s probably a good idea.

We drove home in silence. About a block away from home Kelly shifted from the middle to the passenger side and buttoned her shirt. I was sad to no longer feel her warmth at my side.

Will they hear the car come in? I asked.

Mom will. She ll probably be watching discreetly.

OK we ll give them the full show. Wait for me to come open your door.

We giggled and I pulled into the driveway. I got out and trotted to her side of the car and opened the door for her. She got out and we walked to the door not touching. At the front door we faced each other.

Thank you for ice cream Justin. I really had a nice time. she said looking up at me.

I took both her hands. You re welcome Kelly. And thank you for coming.

I could tell that she almost burst out laughing. I leaned forward and gave her the slightest kiss on the lips followed by another on the forehead. She smiled. While I was close I said I have the biggest urge to cram my tongue down your throat.

Yeah? Well I want to grab your crotch! she whispered back.

Why do you think I m holding your hands? I whispered in return. That was it. We broke up in gales of laughter. I let her hands go and opened the door for her. She went in and I wished her good-night she saying that she d see me in school tomorrow.

As I opened my car door I heard her father s voice. Justin can I have a word with you?

Sure sir I said letting go of the door.

He came up and faced me squarely hardly a foot away. Justin it s obvious even to a father that Kelly s pretty taken with you.

Yes sir. I mean really?

Yes. You re all she s talked about to her mother since we got home. That s never happened before. She s never talked about the other boys she d dated like that. In fact her mother and I have been concerned because she s never had a boyfriend before. She d go out once and that would be it.

She s kinda told me that sir. She said the other guys were jerks I wasn t really sure where he was going.

He dropped his head and looked at his shoes. Kelly means the world to me Justin. All I want to say is please be careful. Please don t hurt her.

Sir I know we ve only gone out a couple times but I like Kelly a lot. I m really trying not to be a jerk and I want to treat her as well as I can. Maybe if it s OK with you sometime we can talk about what she likes so I can surprise her?

He looked up and smiled. Maybe you are as special as she says you are. Put it this way he said stepping back to go in You made a helluva start with the roses! But you know he confided softly In my experience one is every bit as good as a dozen and can come more often. So with greater frequency you come out ahead. Good night Justin. With that he turned and walked back towards the door.

I breathed a huge sigh of relief and drove home hoping I d made a good impression on Dad.

Kelly told me about Mom: Mom had greeted her at the door while Dad slipped past and quizzed her about our date. Kelly had talked about ice cream but carefully avoided our later activities. Mom had pried but Kelly had resisted.

It s so nice to be able to talk to him. He listens he really listens. And we talk about interesting things. We share so much with each other. He s not like any of the other jerks. All they wanted was sex.

And he doesn t want sex? said Mom a trace of concern mixed with curiosity.

Well he hasn t wanted just sex so far Kelly replied believing to herself that it was the truth based on what I d said. And we laugh. Oh Mom do you know how wonderful it is when he makes me laugh?

Uh oh. Sounds like my little girl is falling pretty hard.

Kelly hugged her mom tight and could only squeak out a tiny Yeah!

He s so tall! Mom said.

He is. I like it said Kelly with a smile.

Can I give you a tip? Mom asked.

Sure.

Stand on a step above him and kiss him when you can. I used to do that with your father. It s easier on the neck! She giggled.

Stand on a step to equalize our heights Kelly said thoughtfully Now why didn t I think of that? They hugged for a minute.

Dad came in and mumbled He seems like a nice boy and continued on past.

Is that the Dad Seal of Approval? asked Kelly.

As close as you re likely to get subject to withdrawal at any time. Kelly?

Yes Mom?

He s a hunk. He can keep his shoes under my bed anytime!

MOTHER!

Wow! You re Mom s warm for my form? Cool! This could be fun!

Justin don t you dare think about anything like that! Kelly was really mad.

Whoa. I m only teasing I said and added quietly since we were at school It s you I love. And you re dad didn t try to break my neck or anything.

He s really a softie at heart especially where I m concerned. If you take care of me it will probably go fine with him.

I d love to take care of you right now.

I wish you could. Can we get ice cream tonight?

I don t think so. Way too much homework.

Why don t you come home with me after school? We can study and you can stay for dinner.

I ve only got my bike.

We can walk together it s not that far.

OK. I ll call home from your house and tell my folks.

Great. I was rewarded by one of Kelly s big smiles. I floated down the corridor to class.

After school we ambled home. It was tough to manage books and my bike with Kelly having to take my arm and manage her books too. It was the days before backpacks.

We passed a florist. Wait here! I said and dropping my books I ran into the shop.

I emerged with a single red rose and presented it to her. I was rewarded with a smile and shining eyes. Justin it s beautiful! She went up on her toes and kissed my cheek. We continued to amble.

When we got to her house Kelly announced to her mother what she had invited me for. To her credit Mom never blinked and welcomed me warmly asking if I liked chicken. I said yes and Kelly and I proceeded to spread books on the living room floor sitting side-by-side and immediately engaging in the tons of homework we both had. From time to time we d take a break and chat. Mom was busy doing this and that so we weren t free to express romantic interest other than in small talk. We made greater progress on homework that we d anticipated and by the time Dad got home from work we were nearly done.

Daddy look what Justin gave me! Kelly said bringing the rose she to show him.

That s lovely Kelly he said and looking at me he winked and smiled. I m starved. Is dinner almost ready?

Yes dear said Mom Justin s joining us.

Great said Dad. Let me change clothes.

Over dinner we talked mostly about me. It was more of the gentle interrogation I had gotten last night. I talked about being on the basketball team. Dad had played too so he and I quickly lost the ladies with a discussion of tactics picks rolls gives goes and rebounding. Mom asked me about my family and I was pretty careful there and it showed. She was sensitive enough not to press the subject. Kelly talked about homework school and having trouble concentrating on the last few weeks of work before graduation. That led to a long conversation about graduation and everyone s plans.

After dinner Kelly said Mom and Dad Justin has been coaching me to improve my belching but I ll spare you a demonstration. It might hurt your ears!

Thank you my sweet daughter said Dad with mock relief I m glad Justin is showing you the finer side of life.

He is but I ve already told him I ll never belch as well as he does. Show us Justin!

I know I blushed a deep red Are you kidding?

Oh now he gets shy! said Kelly laughing.

It s just as well said Mom If you can hurt our ears he might bring the house down!

Mom we re going to take a walk to let dinner settle before we finish homework said Kelly standing up.

Shouldn t we do dishes first I asked standing up and taking my plate.

I ll make a deal said Mom Help me clear plates and I ll take care of dishes. You two have better things to do. Take that walk.

Deal Mom.

It only took us a moment to clear the table and then we went out into the cool night air. Kelly wore a loose sweatshirt that hid her uppermost assets but her jeans looked like they d been spray-painted on. We walked around the block arm-in-arm and talking about the dinner conversation. It was starting to get dark.

Do you think the neighbors would mind if I kissed you? I asked.

Nope and I thought you d never ask! Kelly said. I moved to kiss her and she stopped me. Wait she said hand pressing my chest Mom gave me a suggestion. She led me to the curb. Facing me she stood on the curb while I stood lower in the street. Mom suggested that I should stand on a step to kiss you so that I would be taller! She wrapped her arms around my neck and smiled.

No she didn t really!

Yes she really did! said Kelly starting to laugh.

Did you tell her you d already figured that out? I asked.

Are you kidding?

Did you tell her that it s easier from higher up to climb up my body lower yourself on me and make love to me? I asked.

Oh yes Justin she replied mockingly I told her how I wrapped my legs around you sank on your big cock and rocked you until you filled me with your cum.

I bet you didn t.

I bet I didn t either. But in a way I wanted to because it was so delicious.

I know what you mean.

We re wasting time. Kiss me. I did a sweet gentle kiss. Just one and we continued walking. I d be happy to give them a show I said.

Hmm. Feeling uncomfortable?

It s tough to concentrate on homework when I m as hard as I was.

Kelly giggled I noticed.

You were looking? I said surprised.

I look at your crotch a lot sir knight. It contains an object of my love.

I wish you could love it. I said wistfully.

An advantage of growing up in this neighborhood is that I know all the shortcuts. Come with me. She took my hand and led me through several yards. We arrived at the back of a garage. It was secluded. This is our garage Kelly said as she backed me up against the garage wall No one can see us here.

But there s no step for you I said looking around.

Don t need one for what I had in mind. She dropped to her knees and unzipped my pants. In a moment they were at my knees and she hungrily sucked my cock. I looked down to see her head bobbing as she stroked me with her lips. She came off with a pop and began licking the shaft along its entire length looking up at me to see my reaction. I leaned back against the garage wall.

Kelly that s so good! I panted.

Not done yet and she resumed sucking me taking my cock ever deeper into her mouth. Then her nose touched my pubic hair and once again she had taken all of my hard inches. She slowly raised off and then slowly went down. She slowly raised off and came up for air for a minute.

I m remembering when you made love to me sooo slowly. I want to do that to you with my mouth. She resumed taking me all the way with agonizing slowness.

I remembered that time when her body seemed to melt into mine and every inch of us touched each other. How I d refused the urge to quicken and finally had held out slowly sinking in one last time to explode inside her she arching in orgasm.

Well that was enough fantasy for me. She went down swallowing me and without warning I exploded in her throat. She gagged less than the last time and managed to hold every drop. She backed off and worked hard sucking just my head as I continued to spurt gobs stroking my shaft with her hand.

Oh Kelly that was so good! I said weak in the knees.

I m glad you liked it. I m so happy I could do that for you she said as she dragged my pants back up my legs. We should probably get home. We ve been gone a while.

I think I can walk I joked. Do we just appear in the back yard?

We probably could but I won t chance it. There s a short way around front.

We walked and giggled. Back at her house I gathered my books. I thanked her parents for dinner. Kelly walked me outside. At my bike we faced each other.

Is Mom watching? I asked.

Probably. Why?

I sank to my knees and face-to-face I put my free arm around her neck and planted a big wet kiss on her lips.

Justin I can t believe you re doing this! she laughed.

Mom wants my shoes under her bed. Too bad Mom you only get to watch!

She ll be OK with this Kelly said mostly to reassure herself. Especially when I tell her it was for her consumption.

You mean you didn t like it? I said with a hurt tone.

I prefer not to be slobbered she said wiping her mouth with her arm.

It was part of the sound effects I replied. I thought a big smack was important.

We laughed and hugged. Thank you for a nice evening. I said.

I m glad you could come she said with a sly smile.

Me too. See you tomorrow.

The next day at school was just as awful. My distraction was complete. I made up for it by seeking Kelly out after every class. I would come up to her and whisper I love you in her ear. Homework load was a killer so we agreed that seeing each other that night would be impossible.

About eight though our phone rang.

Hello?

Ice cream.

Kelly?

Now. There was a sharp edge in her voice.

I ll be there in fifteen minutes.

She was waiting in the driveway when I arrived. I jumped out to open her door but she beat me to it. I backed out and we drove away.

Skip the ice cream she said curtly Go straight to the pond.

Yes m am I answered respectfully Kelly what s wrong? She was silent. No matter what I said she was silent. She didn t move over next to me she wouldn t even look at me. We parked in our spot overlooking the pond.

As soon as we were parked Kelly undid her seatbelt and stripped off her sweatshirt and jeans. No underwear. She was completely naked beside me.

You have until I count to ten to get your clothes off and get over here.

What?

Just do it! Don t waste time!

I obliged and moved over sitting in the middle of the bench seat. She actually counted out loud! As soon as I moved over Kelly turned straddled me and dropped herself on my cock sinking up to the hilt. She kissed me passionately and ground my cock into her pussy. She did that melting thing where she made every inch of her body press into mine. She moaned and gasped as she rode me - short strokes to keep pressed against me. For my part I held her tight and kissed back wondering why she felt so urgent why she was so eager to make love. We loved away our skin touching all along our chests and bellies. What was wrong? I thought. What had brought this on? Why did I sense such urgency? Why had she seemed so distracted and upset from the moment she had called? I had no answers. Her kisses were deep as her tongue probed my mouth with passion even Kelly had not shown before. She rocked and rocked as I filled her with my hardness.

And then I felt an incredible sense of warmth and love. I knew that I had to give to Kelly now. I had to show her just how much I loved her. I had to be the giver. In some sense she was taking because she had to. I didn t know why but it didn t matter. I could feel her nipples against my chest. I would have loved to kiss them but she wouldn t let go and clung to me closely. Her breathing quickened and I could tell she was building towards a strong orgasm. I tried to focus my entire being on feeling our touching skin on feeling myself inside her. I didn t want to just give her my cum I wanted her to receive every last bit of myself. I made love to her with a strength of heart that didn t translate into frantic movement but rather to an intensity of making what we were doing love. She rode me ever more urgently moaning louder in rhythm of our stroking. It built and built within her I could feel her body tightening as she approached climax.

Then she did it to me again and in my own intensity I was ready for it. She broke our kiss and tongued my ear breathing hot wet breath and French kissing it. It worked. I came hard inside her as she too came gripping me even tighter and clamping me with her pussy muscles. I thought the hardness would be squeezed out of me and her muscles contracted in a frantic rhythm milking every last drop. It seemed I felt my cock expand and grow as it spasmed its essence deep inside my beautiful lady. It went on forever as if I were having multiple orgasms with her. I couldn t stop ejaculating. Finally spent we clung to each other. We were silent for a long time. Then I felt warm tears on my cheek. She was crying.

What s wrong? I asked the concern I d felt since the phone call now surfacing.

I needed you so badly she sobbed I wanted to make love to you so much.

Any special reason why? Not that I m complaining. But I was so worried by the way you were acting.

You sweet man! You came to me every period today to whisper that you loved me! Every time you did I could barely walk I was so weak in the knees. Everybody knew something was wrong but I wouldn t tell them. I could feel myself blushing.

Was I wrong to do that? I asked a little confused.

Not at all! she said smiling through tears It was another of those wonderfully romantic things that you do that makes me so incredibly happy! And she sobbed again.

So should I interpret these as happy tears? I asked starting to feel relieved.

Yes my deepest love and there s more she snuffed. I had Kleenex in the glove compartment. I took them out and handed them to her. She blew her nose.

I had to tell someone about how I felt. So Mom and I had a Mother-Daughter Chat.

You re kidding. What did you say?

I told her about you. How you re fun and nice and romantic. And then I told her that I was falling in love with you and that you felt the same way about me. I told her about the beach.

The beach! What did she say?

Wait there s more. I told her we made love.

WHAT!

I told her we made love at the beach.

Kelly what did you say?

I told her about you brushing my hair for an hour. I said that having you do that was the most wonderful thing anyone had ever done for me.

Yes? And?

And I told her that I asked you to take my virginity. Kelly said.

What did she say?

She asked if we had sex. I said no.

Huh? You said no?

I told her that you said that you wouldn t have sex with me but that you d only make love to me. I told her that you insisted that I recognize the difference.

What did she say?

She was blown away. She was impressed with you young man.

Then what?

I told her that I practically raped you!

No!

Yes! She asked me if I enjoyed it.

Did you?

Silly question! I said it was even more wonderful than brushing my hair. I told her I loved it.

What did she say?

She cried. She hugged me and told me to be careful. But she told me that she understood. Kelly smiled. Then she giggled.

What? I asked.

She asked me how big you were Kelly kept giggling.

Oh God!

I told her the truth. I said you were huge.

You didn t!

I did!

What did she say?

She asked me if they should go away again this weekend. I said yes of course. I think I made her horny and she s going to take Dad somewhere screw his lights out all weekend. She said that for you to do that beach thing so early after we started dating showed an incredible romantic streak and that you were a keeper and that she d help. Mom s something.

Am I long enough to be a keeper? I asked with mock innocence. She wiggled and moved on my still-hardness inside her.

I think so. It sure feels like it to me. When we get home I ll measure to see if you re longer than the legal minimum.

Are you going to string me up or am I catch-and-release?

You re a catch and don t ever expect me to let you go.

I don t ever want to be let go. And with that I had to kiss her. Kelly I keep thinking that I could never love you more than I do this instant and then the instant passes and I love you even more!

Justin don t ever stop. She was really crying now. I handed her a new Kleenex.

I have fallen completely and totally in love with this fictional woman having drafted these four parts in as many days. Feedback is always appreciated. There is one more part before we let this lady and her knight ride off into the sunset.